I’ve also been reading the book my son has been working on for 8 years. He had to submit it to the publisher (Penguin) at the end of June but he’s added another chapter since then. The vast majority of my comments pertain to typos but occasionally I notice some dissonance in time frames or a lengthy passage that could be cut.
It will be published next spring.
If you are on Facebook you can see what I am reading!!! However, my ‘virtual bookshelf’ as it is called, may need to be updated a bit as I’ve just started re-reading Edith Wharton as my friend Helen passed it on…